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Jim Porter: 2016 Bulwer-Lytton fiction contest results, part 2 (opinion)

Jim Porter
Law Review

Bulwer Lytton time. Round two. The Bulwer-Lytton contest challenges entrants to compose bad opening sentences to imaginary novels.

It takes its name from the novelist Edward George Bulwer-Lytton, who began a novel with "It was a dark and stormy night." But you know that. See if you can find the ringer.

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She walked toward me with her high heels clacking like an out-of-balance ceiling fan set on low, smiling as though about to spit pus from a dental abscess, and I knew right away that she was going to leave me feeling like I had used a wood rasp to cure my hemorrhoids.

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It was a dark and stormy night, but I'm going to make America great again by building massive walls (for free) and boosting my brand and branding women and bombing our enemies with bombastic buffoonery, as I go on with a bad opening sentence to my imaginary (scary) novel. (JP, who couldn't help himself. Vote.)

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We got a stiff on the sidewalk all bled out; a stiff on a tugboat tied up with enough cement to build the Hoover Dam; Louie Miller empties out his bank account and falls off the face of the planet; Jenny Diver, Sukey Tawdry, Lotte Lenya, and Lucy Brown all get death threats … I got no goddamned proof, but five'll get ya ten that Macky's back in town.

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As he gazed at Ming's lifeless body draped over the sushi bar, chopsticks protruding from his back, Det. Herc Lue Perrot came to the sobering realization that tonight, there had been a murder at the Orient Express.

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She was like my ex-girlfriend Ashley, who'd stolen my car, broken my heart, murdered my father, robbed a bank, and set off a pipe bomb in Central Park—tall.

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As its newly-incentivized next-gen thought leader, Li-Kwan Patel saw the handwriting on the wall: there was no kicking the can down the road because the paradigm shift at Synergex, Inc. necessitated him to hit the ground running, avoid low-hanging fruit like the plague, and strategize scalable core competencies to close the loop on feedback redundancy, for at the end of the day it all boiled down to boldly going where none had gone before.

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Osgood knew he wasn't popular, well-liked, or even very good looking, and could suck the life out of a room like a fat kid sucking the filling out of a Twinkie, but surely a date with the beautiful blonde in the corner wasn't out of the question, he thought as he licked the cream from his fingers.

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Francine was intrigued by the idea of a threesome with a unicyle-riding circus clown, a zither-playing contortionist, and a milkman because she didn't know that the latter still even existed.

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She wanted — no — she needed Robert, oh, what she would give if he knew that he was the first thing on her mind at the start of each day, if he knew that she yearned, yearned to be happily by his side at the spring dance, yes, she needed Robert — unless Brian dumped that bleach blond snob Leah in time, in which case she'd need Brian.

Jim Porter is an attorney with Porter Simon licensed in California and Nevada, with offices in Truckee, Tahoe City and Reno. Jim's practice areas include: development, construction, business, HOAs, contracts, personal injury, accidents, mediation and other transactional matters. He may be reached at porter@portersimon.com or http://www.portersimon.com.